Petscop 2 - Revision history

Newmaker: Text replacement - "Zig-zag Picture Path" to "Building Photo Path"

2018-11-25T00:26:55Z

Text replacement - "Zig-zag Picture Path" to "Building Photo Path"

Newmaker at 07:45, 17 November 2018

2018-11-17T07:45:49Z

Newmaker: /* Summary */

2018-11-17T07:41:32Z

‎Summary

Newmaker: /* Newmaker Plane again */

2018-11-17T07:29:39Z

‎Newmaker Plane again

Newmaker: /* Quitters' Time */

2018-11-17T07:28:21Z

‎Quitters' Time

Newmaker: /* TOOL Time */

2018-11-17T07:10:31Z

‎TOOL Time

Newmaker: /* Under the Newmaker Plane, back half */

2018-11-17T07:05:28Z

‎Under the Newmaker Plane, back half

Newmaker: /* Under the Newmaker Plane */

2018-11-17T06:57:56Z

‎Under the Newmaker Plane

Newmaker: /* Newmaker Plane */

2018-11-17T04:55:27Z

‎Newmaker Plane

Newmaker: /* Summary */

2018-11-17T04:53:07Z

‎Summary

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 * {{ts|2|02|17}} ''Paul collects the {{pieces|3}} in the lower left of the office, walking around the lower part of the office for a moment.''
 * {{ts|2|02|20}} Paul: "Uh..."
-* {{ts|2|02|23}} ''Paul exits left to the [[Zig-zag Picture Path]].''
+* {{ts|2|02|23}} ''Paul exits left to the [[Building Photo Path]].''
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 * {{ts|2|03|31}} ''Paul walks around this area, unable to see the [[player]], but occasionally collecting unseen [[pieces]], totalling {{pieces|11}}.''
 * {{ts|2|03|34}} Paul: "Uhh... Yeah."
-* {{ts|2|03|50}} ''Paul returns from the area behind the opening and walks the other way on the road, like with the downward path at the [[Zig-zag Picture Path|previous room]]. The camera stays fixed in place as his footsteps and light circle fade.''
+* {{ts|2|03|50}} ''Paul returns from the area behind the opening and walks the other way on the road, like with the downward path at the [[Building Photo Path|previous room]]. The camera stays fixed in place as his footsteps and light circle fade.''
 * {{ts|2|04|01}} ''Paul returns from the bottom area and heads right, collecting a group of {{pieces|6}} near the opening to [[Mike's Grave]], and then collects {{pieces|4}} more as he moves towards the [[Child Library Hallway]].''
 * {{ts|2|04|14}} ''Paul returns to the opening and exits north to [[Mike's Grave]].

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 }}
-The {{videourl|2|title=second video}}. Revealed at the same time as [[Petscop 1|the first video]], this one mostly explores the [[Newmaker Plane]].
+The {{videourl|2|title=second video}}. Revealed at the same time as [[Petscop 1|the first video]], this one mostly explores the area under [[Newmaker Plane]]. The place called... [[Under the Newmaker Plane]].
 The video description was left blank.

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 A little sparse for a summary, I suppose.
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 === Newmaker Plane again ===
 * {{ts|2|11|27}} ''Paul exits onto the [[Newmaker Plane]], by the [[Newmaker Plane Back Door]]. He wanders around the door, eventually heading slightly east, then west, then back to the door.''
 * {{ts|2|11|29}} Paul: "And I'm back up here again. This again..."

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 ==== Quitters' Time ====
+{{center|
 * {{ts|2|09|03}} ''Paul returns to the [[Back T Junction]] and goes right to the [[Quitter Hallway]], immediately collecting the {{pieces|3}} in front of him.''
 * {{ts|2|09|11}} ''Paul passes the left [[Quitter's Room|Quitter's Room entrance]], collecting {{pieces|1}} from the next group of 3, before doubling back and moving up to examine it. He collects {{pieces|2}} more before being blocked by a red-ground wall. He walks around in the blocked passageway for a few seconds.''
 * {{ts|2|09|15}} Paul: ''(continuing)'' "... and maybe you'll find stuff that I can't find, here."
 * {{ts|2|09|19}} ''Paul exits the blocked passage and continues right, collecting the {{pieces|2}} he left behind and encountering the right [[Quitter's Room|entrance]]. He stops for a moment before heading up into it.'' {{poi|The transition to the hallway happens well before the wall, if it were present, would have blocked his progress.}}
 * {{ts|2|09|24}} ''Paul enters a thin passageway on the way to the [[Quitter's Room]] proper.'' {{poi|Unlike the blocked side, there are no pieces here, and the passageway you enter is much thinner than it was outside.}}
 * {{ts|2|09|27}} ''Paul enters the [[Quitter's Room]], on the right (reversed) side.''
 * {{ts|2|09|31}} ''Paul walks left, and encounters [[Tiara]] for the first time.''
 * {{ts|2|09|42}} ''After walking around the room and watching [[Tiara]] mimic his movements, Paul walks behind the bookcase. The same [[Sounds#Petscop 2|tones]] that played when the [[Newmaker Plane Cellar Door|cellar door]] opened play again, and Tiara no longer mimics the [[player]]'s movements perfectly, as well as being delayed by about half a second. As this goes on, Tiara's movements are even further "incorrect".''
 * {{ts|2|09|47}} Paul: "Uhh, what the fuck? ... Wait a second."
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 * {{ts|2|10|20}} ''Paul occasionally moves around by the wall while talking. Tiara mirrors him.''
 * {{ts|2|10|33}} Paul: "And also the way [[Tiara|the guy]], on the other side, was moving for a moment. I'm gonna... ask for your comment later on that. Um..."
-* {{ts|2|10|43}} ''Paul moves away from the middle wall, along the bottom side of the room, and then up to the top right, where a clock and note are on the wall. Paul checks the note.''{{todoi|remember being born note}}
+{{center|
 * {{ts|2|10|42}} Paul: "So I was looking around here. So, this is backwards, it says, uh... 'Do you remember being born?' Uh..."
 * {{ts|2|10|55}} ''Paul stops viewing the note and walks to the bottom of the room, where {{petscopfont|QUITTER'S ROOM}} is written on the ground.''
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 * {{ts|2|11|13}} ''Paul enters the [[Quitter Hallway]] and heads right, to the [[Back Stairway]].''
 * {{ts|2|11|14}} ''Paul walks north through the [[Back Stairway]] passageway, towards the stairs.''
 * {{ts|2|11|22}} ''Paul ascends the stairs and leaves the room. The [[Loading screens#Empty Newmaker Plane|empty Newmaker Plane loading screen]] is shown.''

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 ==== TOOL Time ====
+{{center|
 * {{ts|2|06|39}} ''Paul walks up through the [[Back T Junction]], turning left and entering the [[TOOL Hallway]].''
 * {{ts|2|06|42}} ''Paul picks up {{pieces|6}} in front of the building, stopping to look at the animating image on the wall briefly.''
 * {{ts|2|06|52}} ''Paul enters the doorway to the [[TOOL Room]].''
+{{center|
 * {{ts|2|06|54}} ''Paul collects the first {{pieces|4}} in front of the doorway, and checks the drawings on the walls.''
 * {{ts|2|07|05}} ''Paul collects another group of {{pieces|2}} as he moves to the right.''
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 * {{ts|2|08|22}} ''The sound plays again.''
-* {{ts|2|08|34}} ''A [[jump cut]]. The [[Windmill] is in the same state as it was before.''
+* {{ts|2|08|34}} ''A [[jump cut]]. The [[Windmill]] is in the same state as it was before.''
 * {{ts|2|08|36}} Paul: "Alright, so, it's been like two minutes. And, uh, when those sounds were playing there was nothing happening as far as I could tell, and nothing has happened since. So, I'm just gonna keep going.
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 * {{ts|2|09|02}} Paul: "Uh... But also, uh... When you come home, next month, and, uh... Hopefully you're feeling a little more enthusiastic about that now. We can investigate this together..."
 ==== Quitters' Time ====

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 === Under the Newmaker Plane, back half ===
+{{center|
 * {{ts|2|04|22}} ''Paul appears at the south enterance point in [[Mike's Grave]].''
 * {{ts|2|04|23}} Paul: "Hm."
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 * {{ts|2|04|41}} ''Paul checks [[Mike's Grave#The tombstone|the tombstone]].''
-{{todo|(special tombstone box)<br>Michael Hammond<br>1988 - 1995<br>Mike was a gift.
+{{textbox/Mike's Grave}}
 * {{ts|2|04|47}} Paul: "That's a dead kid! ... Yep. ... ''(quietly)'' Hmm."
 * {{ts|2|04|57}} ''Paul exits the tombstone text.''
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 ==== The Daisy and Care NLM ====
 * {{ts|2|05|00}} ''Paul enters the [[Daisy Shack#Main floor|Daisy Shack]]. The entire screen is tinted a slight red.''
 * {{ts|2|05|02}} Paul: "'kay."
 * {{ts|2|05|04}} ''Paul interacts with the daisy, which jettisons one of its petals with a loud noise{{todoi|get dat [[sounds]]}}. The red tint fades and the daisy lowers slightly.''
 * {{ts|2|05|06}} ''Paul interacts with it again, jettisoning another petal, 7 times in total. Each time, the daisy lowers slightly, and the screen alternates between tinted red and being clear.''
 * {{ts|2|05|13}} ''Paul pauses for a brief moment before picking another 6 petals, leaving 3 left. He then stops.''
 * {{ts|2|05|20}} Paul: "Wait."
+{{center|[[File:UNP-DaisyShack-Lower.png|320px|Can't touch this, yet]]}}
 * {{ts|2|05|21}} ''Paul exits the [[Daisy Shack]] and returns to [[Mike's Grave]].''
 * {{ts|2|05|24}} ''Paul turns around and enters the right opening into the [[Daisy Shack#Basement|basement of the Daisy Shack]]. [[Care NLM]] is atop a pillar of red ground topped with grass, and the stem of the daisy is visible.''
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 * {{ts|2|05|52}} ''Paul walks to the right of the hole and back; the camera and lighting in this room do not move, either, and the [[player]] fades into the dark again.''
 * {{ts|2|05|56}} ''Paul returns, exits, and re-enters the basement again.''
+{{center|
 * {{ts|2|06|02}} ''The screen is tinted red. The pillar has lowered and the grass is even with the gray tile; the gray stem of the daisy is still visible. [[Care NLM]] has taken on a stuttering, glitch-esque appearance.''
 * {{ts|2|06|04}} ''Paul walks forwards, revealing that [[Care NLM]] is intangible and cannot be caught.''

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 === Under the Newmaker Plane ===
+{{clear}}
 ==== Office area ====
 * {{ts|2|01|10}} ''Paul appears on the stairs in the [[Furnace Room]], facing downwards.''
 * {{ts|2|01|13}} Paul: "Huh."
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 * {{ts|2|01|45}} Paul: "That a phone?"
 * {{ts|2|01|48}} ''Paul exits through the opening at the left, into the [[Office]] proper. The phone continues to ring.''
+{{center|[[File:UNP-Office1.png|320px|The inside of the office, phone ringing]] [[File:UNP-Office2.png|320px|In the middle]]}}
 * {{ts|2|01|49}} ''The [[Office]] is visible, with the phone animating as it rings.''
 * {{ts|2|01|52}} ''Paul interacts with the phone, which animates to have its receiver upright.''
-{{todo|"Care left the room." textbox}}
+{{textbox/Care left the room}}
 * {{ts|2|01|57}} Paul ''(with the message box still open)'': "What is this."
-* {{ts|2|02|06}} ''Paul checks the corkboard, showing the [[Care A/B/NLM Note]].''{{todoi|image}}
+* {{ts|2|02|06}} ''Paul checks the corkboard, showing the [[Care#A/B/NLM Note|Care A/B/NLM Note]].''
 * {{ts|2|02|08}} Paul: "''A, B, N-L-M.''"
 * {{ts|2|02|17}} ''Paul collects the {{pieces|3}} in the lower left of the office, walking around the lower part of the office for a moment.''
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 ==== Winding roads ====
 * {{ts|2|02|26}} ''Paul walks down the path towards the screen. The camera does not move, and Paul ends up walking far enough that the area becomes completely dark and his footsteps can no longer be heard.''
 * {{ts|2|02|32}} Paul: "Nothin'!"
 * {{ts|2|02|32}} ''Paul returns from the bottom of the screen, walking upwards, collecting 3 groups of 4 pieces, totalling {{pieces|12}}.''
 * {{ts|2|02|41}} ''Paul reaches the first right turn of the path and looks at the picture of the [[Frozen House]].''
 * {{ts|2|02|48}} ''Paul exits the picture and heads right, collecting {{pieces|4}}.''
 * {{ts|2|02|51}} ''Paul turns left along the path, collecting another three 4-piece groups, for {{pieces|12}} more.''
 * {{ts|2|02|58}} ''Paul reaches the second right turn, viewing the picture of the [[School]]. An ominous sound is heard.{{todoi|upload it to [[sounds]]}}''
 * {{ts|2|03|03}} ''Paul exits the picture and heads right, collecting {{pieces|4}}.''
 * {{ts|2|03|05}} ''Paul turns left along the path, collecting another three 4-piece groups, for {{pieces|12}} more.''
 * {{ts|2|03|12}} ''Paul reaches the third right turn, viewing the picture of the [[Windmill]].''
 * {{ts|2|03|16}} ''Paul exits the picture and heads right, to the [[Road]].''
+{{center|
 * {{ts|2|03|19}} ''Paul begins walking right towards the roadway. A car is heard from the right, travelling on it.''
 * {{ts|2|03|21}} ''Paul stops before the path changes, collecting the bottom group of {{pieces|5}}.''
 * {{ts|2|03|24}} Paul: "This just keeps going."
 * {{ts|2|03|24}} ''Paul collects the top group of {{pieces|5}} and heads to the right. Another car, blue, drives down the roadway as it comes into view.''
 * {{ts|2|03|27}} ''Paul walks across the road, collecting {{pieces|1}} out of the line of five.''
 * {{ts|2|03|29}} ''Paul turns back and walks up the road, collecting {{pieces|4}}. The camera does not move but stays even with the hallway.''
 * {{ts|2|03|31}} ''Paul walks around this area, unable to see the [[player]], but occasionally collecting unseen [[pieces]], totalling {{pieces|11}}.''
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 * {{ts|2|04|16}} ''The [[Loading screens#Shadow Monster Man Path|Shadow Monster Man Path loading screen]] is displayed.''
 === Under the Newmaker Plane, back half ===

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 === Newmaker Plane ===
 * {{ts|2|00|00}} ''The [[player]] is facing upwards and standing to the right of the [[Newmaker Plane Cellar Door]], which is closed.''
 * {{ts|2|00|16}} ''A [[Sounds#Petscop 2|series of tones]] play and the door opens. The player has not moved.''
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 * {{ts|2|01|00}} ''Paul walks upwards, into the door.''
 * {{ts|2|01|01}} ''The [[Loading screens#Quitter's Room|Quitter's Room loading screen]] is displayed.''
 === Under the Newmaker Plane ===

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